This is a very powerful and well written poem one I will hold dear to my heart, being a member of AA

Very nice write... i have a friend whos dad has problems like this and i think my friend feels the same way... Any ways great write

Wow! This really is a strong poem... The expressions are delivered nicely n is well written! 8)
Keep Up The Great Work!! :)

This is very powerful. it was well written, and i think it helps me understand my dad's problem a little more. excellent job.

I really love this poem great job :}

Powerful poem. You said you wanted honesty so here it is. I think you needed to take more time when you wrote this. You crunched in some syllables on some lines, and then left desired syllables on others. I'm still going to give you a 5/5 because I see that it meant something, and it wasn't just a writer wanting to write. Good job Kail. Keep up the meaningful work!

This was deep. I liked it though, is this personal or is it something you just thought? 5/5

Very emotional poem! You have some real talent here, keep it up! 5/5

I must admit that I have justified, and glorified self destruction, and it is easy to become crazy about someone. I will give this one a five for honesty and form. Though it is doubtful that me telling you insanity is never an answer I see admission is the first step to recovering from a broken heart as this poem simply reflects in rhythm and rhyme

Omg omg omg! ;^; I love this poem so so much! Like seriously it is now one of my top favorites! You're so awesome with your writing! It made me cry and then I had to go back and read it a million times over. So breathtaking and it makes me want more! =D I really like this a lot! Especially the last part that says It's much kinder than the knife

Great job!