Wow i can feel your emotion in this piece....very good job!!! keep writing!!!

Aww. that's a sweet one!

Wow...An amazing dedication to your amazing girl..Very cute, sweet and lovely..Flows purrrfectly..It drew a smile in my face..Good job..

Your simply amazing is all i can //say//
Can make the sun come out on any rainy// //day//
All my bad thoughts are a virus and your my //vaccine//
Make my heart jump higher than a //trampoline//
^^In the first line, it should be 'you're', not 'your', and also in the third line. And I'd capitalize all the I's.

When im alone in the dark you are my //light//
For you my love soars higher than any //kite//
When im with you girl i know everything will be //alright//
Even when my love is down seeing you makes it //reignite//
^^Just capitalize those I's! :)

Theres just somthing about that amazing //girl//
Seeing her eyes gleam brighter than a //pearl//
From her personality to the way she makes her hair //curl//
There isnt a word on earth I could use to completly describe the //Amazing Girl//
^^In the first line, you misspelled 'something'.

Overall, it was a good poem. It was very sweet and cute. I'd just change those few little things (yeah, I'm a grammar freak lol) and you'd have an amazing love poem!

This is a very pretty poem! You really showed your emotion and I enjoyed it very much! I know who ever that amazing girl your writting about it a luck girl! You are very talented keep up the good work!

This is a sweeett poem!! Nicely done...!! 8)

5/5.

Wow, that's so cute. I've been trying to write a similar poem about a guy for a while but I keep failing.. This is everything I was trying to say I reall love this piece. I hope everything works out between you!!

Sole x

THe last stanza was my favorite but the first two didnt really catch my eye. Thats just me however nice write.

This is cute, you did a phenonmenal job.and i love the way you seperated the rhymes, it made it more unique. but anyways, that was wayy good. keep it up dear, you have such talent. ♥ katelyn [ :

Aww very sweet. put a smile on my face :)

Aw thats really really cute :)