Comments : One Day

  • 13 years ago

    by Rebecca

    I think this is a poem great! keep it up, i'd love to read more

  • 13 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    I loved this. It had a great feel to it and a great rhythm. Keep writing :)

  • 13 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    Great poem , I really love it well written .

  • 13 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    You have a very unique way of writing that is really wonderful
    the structure of your poems isn't traditional but the flow is wonderful
    excellent job

  • 13 years ago

    by jLegendc

    I can really relate! something like this just happend to me... i can't even believe it.. we were just find and then suddenly.. she goes back to her ex..
    this is what we call life! lol

  • 13 years ago

    by YourOneAndOnly

    Wow another brill piece frm u. one thing tht i will say is the sooner u let go the better, ive realised tht as i never thought i wud get over my ex but i hav and now im wiv the most amazin guy ever. anyway keep up the gd wrk and pm me sumtime. 5/5