It's really good! I do like it :) 5/5

This was an amazing poem, what originality and imagination.
the flow and structure was perfect. If all your poems are this good you'll be on everyones favorite list.
great poem nicely penned

Oh my... i had an idea of writing a poem like this... i wanted it to be longer coz i wanted more! good poem and well written...

Great poem. well written and it really flows. Also it's different than most poems i've read. Good luck with your future works. =)

Wow this poem was amazin, i love the way u organised it, well done u have talent here,hope to hear more soon. 5/5

I havnt read a poem like this before it was very interesting, great work!
5/5 for originality

This was very different and I liked it.