I suddenly realize

by Sweetdream   Jul 27, 2008


This is something called a ten to one story. It's meant to be a writing exercise that makes you focus on word choice and structure. It is 55 words long, the first sentence is ten words the second it nine words and so on... I really enjoy writing them and will post more as they come to me but this was my first.

I looked into her eyes and saw something really unexpected. Her glance was calm, but something new was there. Something I had never seen in her eyes. It was, at first, a little confusing. When I realized, I was stunned. Who knew it could happen. She felt the same. It was unbelievable. It was...Love.

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  • 15 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Nice! i liked it alot keep up the good work!