Oh i adored the rythem of this poem. the ryming was like a song. and i was already picturing a hit =] theres just something about this that i completly fell in love with.

Wow..That was cool..It was like a rap song lol..I agree with the above...I was written so simple but with geniune emotion that made it a good read..Good Job..

Very well writen from the heart I enjoyed reading this one

'Cause I'm No Longer You Life
did you mean 'Cause I'm No Longer Your Life

WOw...
Really strong, sweet n nice 8)

5/5.

This is a great poem. You have a lot of talent i'm so glad it's not going to waste. 5/5