Unexplainable with language

by jutt   Jul 28, 2008


Misty Mountain tops with swirling smoke
Everything was so beautiful that nobody spoke
Forgetting every thought about society,
With natural wonder as far as the eyes see
At one with the landscape
At peace with ourselves
We stare in amazment
As God shares his wealth
I could stand here forever become part of the terrain
Planted like a tree this view is my rain
In this place of enchantment that knows no pain
an unforgettable experience that no language can explain.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Amber

    THat was pretty cool it was liek a nature poem w/ liek a twist of god in it

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Quite a little gem of a poem you have here. I really enjoyed the nature/God aspect of it and giving him credit for the beauty. I do however feel that with a little work and restructuring this poem could much more amazing. It distracted from the poem a little to have all the commas, they are unecessary. Please accept this as only a small critique of making this poem more powerful. It is only my opinion and nothing more.
    You have an amazing ability to write and I can see that with this poem. I am anticipating reading more as I have seen that you are fairly new to this. I pray you do not take offense in the criticism offered and think you will enjoy this community of poets helping each other.

    Thank You,
    Kay

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