The Driving Force of Love

by Sweetdream   Jul 28, 2008


Pumping blood of natures strong will,
Throbbing membranes of genetic thrill,
Ever rising persistence of physical needs,
Innocent by nature like pollen off trees,
Driving forces of both women and men,
The same from their creations to their ends.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sweetdream

    Funny you should say that i didn't really think it was done i just couldn't think where else to go with it... so if anyone has any advice please share...

  • 15 years ago

    by Sweetdream

    Funny you should say that i didn't really think it was done i just couldn't think where else to go with it... so if anyone has any advice please share...

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was actually a pretty good start, but you could definatly add more. I think you have the potential.. Your word choice isn't too shabby and the rhyme was pretty consistant I thought. This wasn't a bad poem really, but it needs to be longer in my opinion. Good luck. 4/5.

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