When will you stop and look at yourself

by NicoleBaby101   Jul 29, 2008


When will you stop and look at yourself
to see all the damage you've done
to see the pain in your eyes

when will you stop and look at yourself
to see the scars that are up and down your arms
to see the tear stains that are on your face

when will you stop and look at yourself
to see the blood on the floors
to see the stains on your clothes

when will you stop and look at yourself
to see the people that love you, that want to help
to see the tears in their own eyes

when will you stop and look at yourself
to see that you are no longer breathing
to see that you are limp on the ground
to see a puddle of blood around you.

when will you stop and look at yourself?

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  • 12 years ago

    by Dave

    Wow, really good except hit a little to close to home for me.

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Awesome poem, really really awesome

  • 15 years ago

    by His Happy Ending

    W.O.W. that is so good
    it reminds me of a good friend of mine
    wow
    great job!! oh and thanks for the comment on mine :) it means alot

  • 15 years ago

    by Laith

    Well, I am speech-less, honestly this one is so deep that i dived into your feeling's and some where in the middle of that ocean of feelings I stoped and looked at my-self and thought.... You Are Amazing!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by neo

    Excellent poem. very moving

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