This is cheering me up. Very well done. Great flow. I am sure it is a beautiful morn if you see through this poetess! Nature is inspiring and so are your poems. You are my summer breeze.... Sending you white clouds from city of Helsinki. :P
This is absolutely beautiful, a really breathtaking poem here. Great descriptions and word choice and you blew me away. What vivid imagery you have painted in my mind, so nice work! Keep writing, always and forever....
^^^ Is probably my favorite stanza of the four. Although it is the summerizing stanza so it should be a bit above par. The rhyme and rhythm throughout the whole poem is very well tended to, and I didnt have to work at all to slow down or speed up. The poem carried me through it the whole way.
There is one thing I disliked. In the very first stanza
you have an ABCB rhyme going the last 3 stanzas but for some reason it avoided you in the first one. I havent a clue if it is just me, but the first stanza kinda chopped it up after reading the last 3. Horizon and Blossoms really dont go hand in hand in rhyming. I think if you could just alter this little problem the poem would be perfect.