Blackout

by xToBeWithYoux   Aug 1, 2008


Drown me in your loving kisses.
Love's warm caress brushes my cheek,
as your lips pull me back to reality.

Lift me to unknown heavens.
Souls ascend through the blue, blue sky
from our entwined heart strings.

Shower me in beautiful compliments.
Let your love flow through my veins
and intoxicate my every thought.

Spin me around until we're giddy with glee.
Smother us both with happiness,
and never let this love end.

Fly me away in your perfect embrace.
Don't let go of me, but this is too much.
I love you, but... too happy... I'll blackout.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    If I'm being honest, I didn't like this at all.

    I'm not sure why though. It just didn't click for me.

    I don't know if it was how you set the poem out or the poem itself.

    I just feel that you're a much better writer than this poem shows you as :/

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    Awwww thats very sweet love it (^_^) 5/5