Sweet suicide

by she   Aug 4, 2008


Oh sweet suicide
Come take me away

Oh sweet suicide
You are the only way

So many choices
The pills or the blade
Oh, either way would be ok

Oh, Sweet suicide
Let me play your game

Ill do as you say
Slit my wrists right through the vein

Oh, sweet suicide
ill play your game

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  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    :) wow short but yummy my style also haha

  • 14 years ago

    by SIMPLY ME

    This is a strong poem,but dude keep your head up and stay strong,dont let the worries of the world bring you down,I was once in your position of wanting to commit suicide but thank God he brought me to life and to my right senses.5/5 keep it up,stay strong

  • 15 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    VERY EMOTIONAL POEM AND SAD HOPE THIS ISN'T ABOUT YOU GREAT POEM THOUGH

  • 15 years ago

    by Court

    "ill me play your game"

    That's WRONG!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    So many choices
    The pills or the blade
    Oh, either way would be ok

    I like this line, It's different from the others.

    Oh, Sweet suicide
    Let me play your game

    omg, I love this line, so simple but so powerful.

    Ill do as you say
    Slit my wrists right through the vein

    I can just picture it.

    Oh, sweet suicide
    ill me play your game

    again I love this line.

    the only thing is that you need to put comas and/or periods, but other than that I love it, good job.

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