Liquid Fantasy

by Bethany   Aug 5, 2008


Your being has warmed my blood.
My muscles contracted from your touch.
I adored the sent that came from you.
It soon became apart of me.

No one else changed my thoughts.
My mind played no game.
It was on my side.
I was only afraid to get lost.

Each day i truly wonder what your doing.
Each day my head was getting clearer.
Somehow you got the wrong message.
Believe me i swear we were the lasting.

I loved you, forever and eternity.
Only thing left of you was a memory.
But you, Just dripped through my fingers,
Your body Limbered.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bethany

    I wasent even trying to ryhme, those words jsut came to me. they were no effort in ryhming ability.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethany

    Poems arent about ryhming.
    its about expressing... if it expresses itself well, it doesnt need ryhiming to back it up, i look at a poem in three different ways, i look at its ryhimg by itself, the epression by itself, and the imagry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Uhm ok i like this one you used anothe way to express it is ok , !!
    ok ,
    i like it ,

    jsut you need to work more on teh rhyming , it is making the poem weak !!

    but ti si a good enough one

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