Loved it soo much!!! this poem is awesome!! it flowed perfectly and the way you worded it was great! Keep up the great work. I wish my poems were as good as this. i give this poem a 5/5 easily.

"Another night that time passed by,
without you by my side."
-- The second line broke up the flow a little bit, so I'd say "without you stading by my side"

"But they cant and they wont,
and they'll always love you even if you don't."
-- I'll be honest and say that I can definitely relate to this. :|

"So how can you love something as horrible as me,
when you have her for all eternity."
-- Nice ending. It tied up the poem perfectly.

5.5
Take care,
Stephanie.

This is an emotional plea that is so romantic
very nice rhyme scheme