I Have Fallen For Him

Ill be openly honest with you, I didn't like how you used heart in the 1st, 3rd, and 5th lines of the last stanza.. it doesn't sound very good together when you repeat a word so much although I know you meant to do it that way. Another thing, I didnt like how the word precious was said twice really close together, it just didn't work for me. Sorry. I think there could be alot lot more thought injected into this piece to make it better.. I didnt feel too much emotion and wasnt wow'd really at all. I felt as though theres a lot more you have to say here.

4/5.

Thanks for the comment.

I like this one, it reminds me of a song though, but that might be me. It's alike toher poems, but yet unique, thats what make it original. Keep it up!