Promises..

by Erin Castillo   Aug 6, 2008


I will, Ill try to.
No matter how far I will find you.
Across the world, under the ocean,
Even if the chances are one in a million.
It doesn't matter how many tries,
As long as I find you and see your eyes.

I will, Ill try to.
Ill circle the whole world just for you.
Ill find a way to bring back that snow,
Never forget that, never let go.

I will, Ill try to.
Ill remember your name and yell if I see you.
Its fine with you, but its not fine with me,
I will be there just wait and see.

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  • 15 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    I love this poem.
    I like the first stanza the best because there's a good flow and the rhyming is great too. For some weird reason I think the first stanza is more... meaningful? You focused on that one more than the others.

    But overall still a lovely poem
    5/5
    ~FountainsOfBlood

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