Tears for the swan (Haiku)

Mm yes, good imagery but a little short too , !!
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Awesome imagery...I feel like I see a beautiful image in front me..
Ur description was incredible and ur usage of words really touched me:)
Great job,plz keep it up:)..

Beautiful job on this Haiku :)
Take Care
Cindy

Great image and flow.

I think you packed a lot of emotion into this little piece, that is why I am such a fan of Haiku, I think you did an excellent job with this one, it was a pleasure to read, keep up the good work.