Aww... it's cute but also sad.. but i love it.Great job =)

Adorible and love the rthymes,

I like this poem, and the rhyming is great..

Thanks for the comment :-)

Oooh!!! this is sooooo sweet!!! i looooove it!!!! def. 5/5 * * * great job!!!!

Wow that was so sweet and good i really like this poem wow!!! lol

I enjoyed reading this poem. Great Job!

Wow,
that was really beautiful.
I loved it.
Keep it up :]

Aw!!! dat was ADORIBLE!!....did you share dat poem with yr gf? she must b a lucky gal ;-) rely sweet, 5/5!!

Well written man i like it from the begunin till the end keep the good job up
much luv
-Moha...

Awww, this is really really sweet! Love reading these sorta poems that guys write! Awesome job!!!!!!! ps thanx for your comment on my poem "hush now"

anyway-back to you...
5/5 for this one!
Aish
xx

So sweet....a really heartfelt poem..the rhyming is good and all in all...good job...

5/5

Awww that is so sweet!!