Everything to Me

by BeautifulCutter   Aug 9, 2008


He's the first robin in the spring, he's a newborn's lungs starting to scream.
He's everything to me-what I need to live && breathe.
His love is so strong && without it I could never go on.
He's the diamond in the rough, he's the toy in my cereal box.
He's everything to me-what I need to live && breathe.

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  • 15 years ago

    by BeautifulCutter

    K...thanks for the tips or whatever but obviously you haven't read my other stuff.

  • 15 years ago

    by HillaryNicole

    I love it its a very good word choice it just needs to be more divided like the words that ryhme dont need to be on the same line they need to be line under line with the way you wrote that 1 line 1 && line 2 ryhme! Aight dats it try dat and ull b fine