Love the poem its so sweet and rele can be understood...5/5

"And my legs get weak
I can barely stand"
[My legs get weak
And I can barely stand]
- Personally I think that it sounds better like that, it might just be me though? Maybe. (:

"Love at first site"
[Love at first sight]
- NOW, I may be wrong with this. Us American's have MANY ways to spell one word and each one has different meanings. 'Site' in America actually means a webSITE or a location of some sort. SIGHT means seeing and such. I know Aussie is different, so it might be the correct spelling there, but if not I thought I'd let you know. (:

I really liked this poem darling. I thought that you did a nice job of piecing it together. Short yet sweet. Very sweet. AND sincere.

Kudos. :D:D:D

This well written poem sure reminds me of the times I thought I was in love

WOW! I love this..isn't this so true. Good Job!!5/5