Misled

Overall it's a good poem with intense writing.
'Clouded senses
Wanton needs
The very place where
Heartache breeds'

This stanza is very good. It holds so much of pain and anguish. I also liked the format of the poem. Good work!

Another great poem from you :O)

There is no reason
For your rhyme
Constant chaos
Wasted time

^ I like the twist on 'rhyme or reason' familiar, yet uniquely different. I like the apathy and frustration in this stanza too.

Dripping, drowning
Stepping in
Underneath your
Liquid skin

^This is has great imagery - like fluid, blood perhaps, and stepping under a person skin, well that is so vivid, I can actually visulise skin stretched to an extreme that is repulsive...but then its liquid skin, so maybe the skin is so skin that the flesh and blood beneath is visible, accessable?

No ones words
Can help a mind
Whose heart is deaf
And faith is blind
^Some people are beyond help, this could be about such a person. Much of the healing process is belief. Faith in ones self and in others is vital if a full recovery is to be attained. I like how you described this person as having a deaf heart and blind faith...very apt!

Clouded senses
Wanton needs
The very place where
Heartache breeds

^I can feel the pain, its been long and enduring. Their lack of strength has sapped others and the emotional turmoil of efforts in vain have caused (bred) heartache.

Masquerading
Fake as real
Won't give you
What you want to feel

^A nice finish here, a moral, if you like!
Be true to yourself and onto others. Respect breeds respect and all the rewards that come with it!

Well done

Michael