Undefined love [[collab]]

by Tangible heartache   Aug 12, 2008


Mounted on the window ledge, as I seek the warmth of the pouring rain,
I look towards the clouds, for an explanation,
Lightning strikes as it illuminates the darkening sky,
I stand mesmerized, left speechless

I sit outside on the porch swing, thinking about nothing,
I look up at the moon as it starts to rain,
And wonder how such beauty could ever exist,
Wondering if anything that beautiful could be inside of me,

My heart beat increases rapidly,
The future of my existence has never been questioned,
Everything becomes silent, as the rain slows down,
I look at the stars, awaiting clarification,

A single tear escapes from my dull brown eyes,
I look up at the stars, and see one shoot across the sky,
I wish for something very important to me,
Hoping someday it would come true,

As my eyes follows the shooting star,
I scream I love you; hoping you could hear it somehow,
I wish that she loves me too,
I wish that I no longer have any more heartaches,

The shooting star glows as if it answered my wish,
And I smile, hoping you heard my wish, hoping it came true,
Another tear falls from my eyes, and my smile grows bigger,
I look up into the night sky, and whisper I love you,

I grab for a the knife and become dead silent,
Many tears escape as I carve your name into the wall,
My hands twitch, as I scream I love you, a million times,
Only if you could hear it,

I walk down to the beach near my house,
And sit in the sand, watching the tidal waves come in,
I draw messages in the sand, hoping you may be able to see them,
And whispers I love you over and over,

My eye catches the gleam coming from the ocean
I walk over and sit watching the tide, until I was left stunned,
Mesmerized, by your beauty; I know this is my time,
I walk over and sit beside you; I can feel my heart racing,
I turn to you and whisper, I love you,
And close my eyes, hoping you would say the same

I hear someone approach me, but I don't turn to look,
I stare into the beautiful blue ocean, wondering,
I feel someone sit next to me, feeling the warmth of him,
I close my eyes and smile as I realize who it is,
I hear him whisper I love you, and I turn to him,
My eyes glowing, and whisper I love you to.

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This is a collab with my bf xD

He did the first stanza, I did the second, and so on ^.^
If you comment mine, comment his to. Thanks!!

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1076479

Written by Makalah Aug. 12, 2008

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lana

    Sometimes, when we are parted from someone close to us all we can do is hope they are perhaps, watching the same star as us and at the same time, even if they are miles away. It helps to bring them closer to us I feel. Well done both of you

  • 15 years ago

    by Mishka

    So so soooooooooooooooo romantic.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Wow, you're only 12. Lol. Mark says to comment yours too, so here ya go.

    Right from the first stanza I love it. I like how you turned questioning beauty into it being within you possibly.

    As my eyes follows the shooting star,
    follow*

    I wish that I no longer have any more heartaches,
    That line is worded really funny. O_<

    I grab for a the knife and become dead silent,
    Many tears escape as I carve your name into the wall,
    My hands twitch, as I scream I love you, a million times,
    Only if you could hear it,

    This is really great imagery.

    I really liked it. Five out of five.