Whoa lol

Uhm it is nice you said IT DONT RHYME lol

becasue i was going to say that
and since it si a quote i wont tell you you need to split it to stanzans so i will comment you on others

so let me say about the others,

fk them

now you can relax sit back and dont care about all they say !! like you even care their BF

soo ,

i dont think it is much important thing you should hang on it !!
get it pass girl if they see you a threat then too bad for them and YAY for you

good work

I like this, because it's so honest. Some may disagree, but I think it's funny when girls get so mad about another girl hanging with their boyfriends. It's nothing but jealousy. :D

"B*t*h you proably haven't even met me"

-- A comma is needed after "b*t*h", lol. & "proably" should be "probably".

I think those are the only things I noticed, so.
:]

Five out of five.

``Briana

[LOL! They made me change the words because I guess b*t*h is an innappropriate word. lol.]

Haha, wow. The title.. I can already tell there's going to be some anger in this piece. :] Wooooot!

Overall, it's a write that's very understandable. Some girls are like this, and I don't even understand why they do it myself. Don't let them get to you though `cause you have every right to hang out with who you want whether others like it or not. But, definatly. I loved this poem because I think a lot of girls could relate to the whole jealously thing. Oh, drama. 5/5

Lol i liked this its very blunt and honest! I hate those types of girls you portray in this quote, great job =]
The fact that it did not rhyme dosent matter not all poems or quotes have to do so in order to be good, nice job ^^

I feel you chic its get aggarvating when people think that girls and guys cant just be friends soa they think your tryna get with dere dude yup i feel u it gets lame

Dang right!
I get people like that all the time. Even though it doesn't rhyme. It's still hot s***

Haha. Really, I do like this.

5/5