Sweet, hope the one this was written for enjoys it too.

This paints a very happy and beautiful picture in my mind, so i hope thats what you were aiming for and if it was. great job.

its a great poem,
keep up the good work.

I was browsing around some poems and liked the title so I click and I just absoulutly loved your poem, I know you don't know me but I just wanted to tell you you have talent

Great!

What a good poem that shows the beauty of young love 5/5.....Jim

A very detailed piece. i loved it. it shows true emotions, and even though the ending is a little sad, i loved that part the most. a little twist is always good in a poem. wonderful job. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

What a sweet love poem. It was written well and the imagery you created was good. The ending got to me a bit, i wasnt expecting it. But it did make the poem even better, to have a twist.
Nice work.
5/5

Such a romantic poem! Keep it up 5/5