You know those moments

by she   Aug 20, 2008


You know those moments
where you dont want to cry
and you dont want to cut

But praying just doesnt seem like enough

You know those moments
when you have the razor to your skin
but your so afraid of what youll lose if you give in
yet your yearning so badly to bleed again

You know those moments
when your own reflection is what haunts you
when your own razor makes you not want to try
when your own guilt makes you want to die

You know those moments?
well so do I.

[theyre moments so they pass,its just to bad they always have to come back]

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  • 15 years ago

    by she

    Make some effort...at least I would TRY
    -aww ok, but i did try....
    :[
    well, ill take your suggestions, thnx for the comment

  • 15 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I am really troubled you did not you use big letters even in such words like "I" and you did not begin even any begin of stanza with big letter... I am no grammar expert but I think you got my point? If English would be my mother language I would make some effort...at least I would TRY.

    Too many times words "when", "you".Too much repeating is no good.

    I missed somehow the point of poem but anyways it is always good to write out what is on your head..

    Keep on writing..

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    Thnx neo, :] ur sweet

  • 15 years ago

    by neo

    Excellent. i voted ya into the weekly contest

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