Great job Josh. As usual you wow with your writing.

-Dan

This was a great piece. very heartfelt yet sad. but at the same time very beautiful too. you expressed yourself well.

But there's not much for me to cry about
For not much happened between us two
You were like a chance that wasn't there
And now I stand alone, instead of with you

i liked that stanza the most. it held the most meaning. and it was a great ending. especially the last two lines really stuck out to me. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

I agree w/ ashlei about the last stanza