As expected from you...it's brilliant...

the message is very overwhelming...so true and deep..

i'll expect more works from you...

Omg!!! that is so amazing!!! i love it! def 5/5!!!

Jeeezzzz its so amazing...

i love it

Wow!! love this poem!! nice work!! keep it up..

Muffinz :) 4/5

Thanx

It would make an easier read if you would separate your paragraphs more, but I like its positive message. 4/5