The oceans shall collide seperating us all, binding us apart until it�¢ï¿½ï¿½s our time to fall.
^^ It should be separating and I recommend you to re-edit your poems for these boxes to go.

The darkness inside us all digs deeper with each day but somewhere out there is love to complete every soul.
^^ I think there should be comma between all and digs

Our dreams shall never die, shining ever brighter over the hills every night.
^^ A very powerful and descriptive idea was shown here.

I promise you, my love, your memories and thoughts shall never fade for they shall live with me forever as I carry on for both our souls.
^^ A truly heartfelt words and commitment you have emphasized here. I admired the dedication you have for that person. It was strongly revealed in this piece. Good Job..

Wow this a fantastic poem. i really did enjoy it, and it kept me wanting to read it. very well done. i loved every stanza.
the sadness and intensity of the poem came through in every line, so the flow was good.
i would even go as far as saying that this is one of my favourite poems.
well done.
5/5

I really did enjoy reading this . The flow and the rhyming were fantastically written , and it also pourred with emotion . Well done , 5/5

And you tell me your no good at writing this is beautiful, i loved every line of it, you'll always be my closet poet, hehe, don't stop writing, your amazing. 5/5 <fantastic, love you xxx

I loved reading this the emotion that you detail is strong and it's so tender and loving its beautiful great work