If only

by military man   Aug 29, 2008


If only my lips could touch
What only your lipstick can brush
If only your thoughts could flash
And prevent my teenage crush
My thoughts are jammed stuck in traffic
How do you ever think am going to manage
Without you..oh..because of you
I live a life of pain and panic
As my heart watches my thoughts burn
Whispering when in love will i ever learn
Forgive me am sorry Shall we ride in a lorry
Forget this nonsense quit the folly
If only we were in love, girl ,you would be my one and only.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha

    This was a really cute poem!!! really really good

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hi there i saw that you lived just up the road from me so i read your poem, it's well written but if i might point out two things"shall we ride in a lorry" was just filler words and should have been left out, it spoils what is a nice poem.
    In your last line you repeat "if only we were in love" a second time spoiling the line.
    Otherwise it was a nice poem
    Well done

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    Such a sweet poem! You expressed your emotions very well, i like it. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by XxXMissSweetPeaXxX

    Awww its cute..lol..i love it..5/5

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