Summers Heat

by Deana   Aug 30, 2008


Summer sizzles, feel the heat
Stars light up the night
Gentle kisses, sweet caress
A haloed moon gives light

Gentle wind,cools the skin
Of lovers lost in bliss
August dreams, shared by two
Spoken with a kiss

Lingering by a river bank
Within a warm embrace
Tossing petals to the air
Nothing can replace

Two hearts lost, before the fall
The chill is yet to be
Summers full of fantasy
Close your eyes to see

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fran

    This was the perfect antidote to a chilly winter afternoon. A pleasure to read.

  • 17 years ago

    by unspokken

    Wow!
    Alot of imagery there, and brillant word choice.
    I think that it is so omantic the way that you talked about the whole year around. It is one of my favorite poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lakota

    That was amazing!!! and soooo cute!!!! 5/5 all the way!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deana
    What a passionate poem of love. Your imagery painted a very vivid image of a wonderful summer love.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned! Vivid picture painting imagery and impeccable flow! Well thought out and void of forced rhyming!! Excellent, Excellent, Excellent!!!! ~~claps~~

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