Oh wow.What a beautıful poem.It was really nıce and so touchıng.You are so talented.
Gıve you my vote.5 poınts.

Ouch!!
so touchy..i'm really sry 4 u..u nicely expressed ur feelings in words!
keep it up..

That was indeed in the right proportion and well enough to stir the so many broken hearted souls what I can say so many many stars spread out and how many of us could relate to this...

Keep it up..Anonymous

This poem is very good i love it

you are an amazing poet

Amazing...
This poem so reminded me of myself, and the pain I'm going through ..
Girl you've just astonished me with this sad/love piece.
I love the last line the most, missing someone you shouldn't miss just....sucks !!!

And an unrhymed poem??, WoW I seriously thought it rhymed at first, but now I realize your internal music is just as awesome as your external music with the rhymed ones =]]

love it sweetie and love you even more <3
write on xx

I know exactley how you feel, one of my exes, we broke up three different times in the past two yeard and now he like sme again....idk what to do.

I really really liked this.
You use such beautiful words to create a picture in the persons mind when you write.

Very touching, so many emotions erupted like a volcano in this piece. Loving but at the same time so sad. To be with someone but no longer want to be.

I wish my poems matched up to how yours are. 5/5