Good dark poem. Well structured as well. I enjoyed it! Well done!

It took about half way through to really get into flow but most people that look at poems that would be to late even for a short poem, no offense but ive never liked fictional poems real life is better. i wont vote because im biased

I will vote because anything worth being credited should be. I enjoyed this poem a LOT. You are really talented and with more practice you'll be one of the best. Keep up the good work and all things will be possible. ^_~" 5/5

Dark and great
keep writing
5/5

I will also vote for in my opinion this was an excellent write from a beginner like what you've stated in your profile. I thought the subject was well portrayed and the ending was more than great. I loved how you portrayed her beauty, role and emotions. Loved all of them. Keep writing.