Utterly an exuberanting piece. To me this is a lovely description of the aftermath abode; Paradise. It reminds one of the exquisite blend of mesmeric joy and frolics moments in the garden of eternal comfort.; Paradise. Your deeds judges all, whether your qualified to be in the confines of the lush garden. Here, creativity of an intellectual talent is displayed with aptness. I'm puzzled at the way you match-make your lovely and exciting words. Keep them coming, your gift is remarkable. Mashallah dear, blessings. :-).
I really like this one. I love reading poems that have a catchy title - this is obviously one. A great thing in this is that it alludes to life in Heaven. Stanza 5 illustrates that pretty well - almost direct descriptions from a certain book :)
The balance of future potential and positivity tips the balance over what negative aspects there are in this piece. Very descriptive and paints a pretty vivid picture. Thanks for giving me something awesome to read! :)