Comments : Paradise and Dreams

  • 12 years ago

    by Heba

    Oh wow,It's another wonderful poem.You made me speechless again.It was really nice and so delicate.I truly loved it.
    Zahra your poems are so close to my heart.You are so talented.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    This made me speechless. Very delicatelly and beautifully written. I really, really liked that.

    You've got talent.

    By the way, I love your nickname (Dark Secrets).

    Feel free to read some of my work.

    The Angel of Secrets

  • 12 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow i really liked this.. the emotion really came through in your words.. fantastic...
    the wording was brilliant. great.. fantastic.
    you are a very good writer
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Salaam alaykum
    That was amazing and I am really speechless. This deserves millions of votes and it is going on my faves. Every word painted a vivid picture in my mind. It was flawless.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen

    I am very much amazed of what was this peice trying to portray.

    The combination of it's lock
    Unknown to all the sorrows we hold
    Interior blinded by serenity's light
    Peace and happiness begin to unfold

    This stanza stood out, as i also, in fact strongly believe that the more we get hurt, the more we become human with good virtues.

    Good Job..

  • 11 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    I loved this poem it was great!

    "Rivers of milk and honey shimmer
    Pure wines, rich as golden streams
    None found drunk, no over hanging
    Scarlet fruits floating, juicy supremes"

    this is my favorite i like how you put food into your poem n it blends so well into it very unique idea beautiful poem 5/5!!

    btw feel free to read some of my poems i cant wait to read more of your poems! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Just a Voice

    I like this. It echoes the many contradictions we find and face as we travel on lifes road. Many faults and failings appear under the lens and of course, we are far from perfect ourselves.

  • 9 years ago

    by Liliana

    Omg what can I say this is amazing 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by bornapoet

    I love this poem. I think it has a really nice touch to it. Very nice. Feel free to comment on my poems and quotes please. Nice job again.

  • 9 years ago

    by Amreen

    Nice piece..keep it up..:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Utterly an exuberanting piece. To me this is a lovely description of the aftermath abode; Paradise. It reminds one of the exquisite blend of mesmeric joy and frolics moments in the garden of eternal comfort.; Paradise. Your deeds judges all, whether your qualified to be in the confines of the lush garden. Here, creativity of an intellectual talent is displayed with aptness. I'm puzzled at the way you match-make your lovely and exciting words. Keep them coming, your gift is remarkable. Mashallah dear, blessings. :-).

  • 6 years ago

    by Maher

    I really like this one. I love reading poems that have a catchy title - this is obviously one. A great thing in this is that it alludes to life in Heaven. Stanza 5 illustrates that pretty well - almost direct descriptions from a certain book :)

    The balance of future potential and positivity tips the balance over what negative aspects there are in this piece. Very descriptive and paints a pretty vivid picture. Thanks for giving me something awesome to read! :)

  • 6 years ago

    by K6

    Exquisite poem.

  • 6 years ago

    by K6

    Exquisite poem.

  • 2 years ago

    by Zia Mikaela

    This is so beautiful! Good job!