When it comes.

by Fantasy   Sep 1, 2008


I feel like the stars are caving in,
And the sky is coming down.

I can't wish,
And dream it will come true.

My hopes,
Only get me so far,
But the rest in left upto you.

My words,
It can't explain,
My heart to you.

It's a puzzle,
Waiting to be finished,
But when the end comes,
It'll be to late.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sugar

    I like this poem. it is simple yet i find it meaningful reflecting to everyone...^_^

    nice job..!

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Hey nice poem i liked it a lot simple yet good 5/5 nicely written

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    5/5.... u have really express ur thoughts here and its just simply portrayed and express the simple emotions,, great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    The flow of the poem was abit off it was kind of choppy to read the message was good but I think if you put more exsamples or just more information to it it would sparkle Plot121

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