Hey i liket this one it has meaning to it keep up your writing

I like your subject matter,
it was alittle hard to read because of the structure, and of the language.(the grammar and spelling),
humans always want to improve everything, but the truth is they can never compete with nature. Never have I seen colours so radiant then in what the earth has given us.

That has alot of meaning,I love it : ).

and I got to agree with you "Why cant these countries accept what nature offer happy?"

I liked the poem but you really need to work on your grammar...bad grammar makes it very hard to understand...

I think this poem was very deep and it held such beauty in it, but I think you should watch your grammar a bit. There such as "People couldn't understood" use "People couldn't underSTAND" But the poem itself was marvelous.
<3Raych

Koolio poem...

The image you have put into such peice is wonderful. your poem wrighting skills, however, need to be improved. this site has hundereds of poem wrighters, read theirs and you should devolpe your own style in time. ;)

Good concept/subject, but i do think you need to work on grammar and structure..

It was very nice deep poem. if you find a better way space it out to make it better to read. that would help.. if you want help on i i will be glad to show you with your poem.

i like this one the best. keep it up hope to see something new soon.