Meaninful poems. A lot of thoughts and ideas. So sad, so true. I like the structure of your poem. Looks nice, four lines. Many stanzas.

For believers this world is a hell and for non-believers this world is a paradise. I totally agree with the sentence "Beliefs were lost in the crowd". Our umma has so much to improve. People are like sheep in the crowd and they do not have personal belief and they will go astray.

Specially in this Ramadan month, I feel my eyes are more wide open to see this world truly is nothing but dust. Our thoughts are more or less controlled by our needs...

Familiar faces,
Greed is their name.
Deadly mistakes;
In the light, in the dark,
But minds in deviation.
^^I think it should be A deadly mistake rather than deadly mistakes as this was referring to the word greed. The idea here was not that solid and somehow misleading us from what you really were trying to portray.

Other living idiots,
With distorted aspects,
Seek Ethics, Virtues
And dreams with no destination.
^^These lines seemed fine and flawless.

Strict rules are applied,
When you belong to a thread of air.
Here injustice ain't a shame,
As it makes all the dumb same.
^^Second line was excellent. What a nice imagery you had there as to what we are in this boundless world. I think a comma after the word here is necessary.

Beliefs were lost in the crowd,
And ambitions were kept by discrimination,
While shaded thoughts were left hidden
On papers of broken identity.
^^Now youre talking in these lines. A very nice attack to whats really goin on in the world today. Hmm. What could say?

In that heartless world,
That is painted by blood,
Where Transients seek eternity,
The light can no more undress their impurity.
^ A very powerful, deep and strong way to end this poem. Sometimes people, they just fight, not knowing of what the issues are, rather than sit and discussed. But of course, larger numbers are those born heartless for they can take and swallow the cruelty of this world.

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that was really greattt

In that heartless world,
That is painted by blood,
Love those lines a lot, enti lazem teddieha 7etta darknesseyya :D :D lool
you know, once I read "familiar faces" I remembered a song called "mad world" I really love this song I think you should lsn to it =DD

Anyway beautiful write hunn
keep it up xx

In that heartless world,
That is painted by blood,
Where Transients seek eternity,
The light can no more undress their impurity.

i strongly support and definitely agree to that lines of yours...
10/10
well done!

Good job

I appreciate your poem. It's a very thoughtful write.
Some of the lines are really good and interesting. Adding to that this one is very captivating too.
Subject of the poem is strong and relevant.
Wonderful poem. Worth reading!

Dude love it truly great work (^_^)

Wow that was amazing, but then your poems are always that way.

WOW ... Simpley wow...

I adore the title, as it flows perfectly with ur perfectly written piece.

Your poem is very unique! I love it! You have a good solid vocabulary that impresses me. Not to mention your perspective on life that turnes my head. Very well done! :)

Im speechless this poem was amazing

Impressive....... i had a gd read. worth reading.
another amazing poem frm u.

(Other living idiots,
With distorted aspects,
Seek Ethics, Virtues,
And dreams with no destination.)

these are the line that i like.
overall i like it frm the start till the end
i enjoy it.
once again good job.....
do write more. =)

Wow Goth...This poem is really beautiful and so touching too.I truely loved it.And the title really suits me, it should has been my name.

Excellent.5\5..

This was a well written peace i liked it alot^.^

Nice wording :)

This is deep....Heavily loaded with meaning. Good job for this!!! God bless you!!!

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