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by babblingxbrooke Sep 7, 2008
Love, romance /
This has been going on too long,
why can't I just come to see,
that although I don't know what,
she has something better than me.
I thought you may be different,
all girls seem to be this way when they're blind.
but when finally I can see clear,
I notice I was wrong, and it kills me inside.
you were so hurt when she left you,
it was so hard for you at the time.
you said you had fallen for me,
and I didn't object or mind.
it's just my luck that I would fall,
and she would come running back.
you took her in with open arms,
and my heart suddenly cracked.
you denied that my feelings were stronger for you then yours were for me,
but baby that's not true.
you're in love with her,
and I'm still in love with you.
by Nobodys Hero
A really sad yet very well written poem.
The flow was great and the rhyming was very good. I really liked this piece so 5/5