Wake Up Dead (One of my earliest poems)

by Prince Jared   Sep 11, 2008


Only once it happens, has it happened yet?
As I hang here, tell me when I'm dead

As I fight and struggle for my last breath
Now I am denying that I have regrets

I'm screaming out don't say it's all in my head
Will anyone come to their senses before I wake up dead?

I never said I loved anyone, but I longed for consistency
I'm here alone now and my soul cries to be freed

I'm hanging on by a thread; in the darkness I call
As I reach out a hand, I wake up dead and start to fall

Inspired by: Shinedown - .45

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  • 16 years ago

    by ChallengexEverything

    That was sweet :]

    nice job.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Prince Jared

    Lol, yeah, really scary.

  • 17 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Aww!!! this is so sad!!!

    I'm screaming out don't say it's all in my head
    Will anyone come to their senses before I wake up dead?

    ^^i hear ya....... i've come to my senses at least enough to hear you.......

    I'm hanging on by a thread; in the darkness I call
    As I reach out a hand, I wake up dead and start to fall

    ^^..........and reach out a hand to you.

    btw you better not ever ever EVER wake up dead!!!!! (cuz you know, that would just be freaky.................) ;-) !!

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