What If.

by Hologram   Sep 16, 2008


What if I was sad
Would you wipe away my tears?
Would you still be my friend
After all these years?

What if I lied
Just to protect you
Would you see it like I do
Would you still help me pull through?

What if I was dying inside
Would you just reject me?
Or would you help me live
And show me all the things I could be?

What if one day we had a argument
Would you just walk away?
Would you ever walk back in
Just to hear what I have to say?
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To me this doesnt make much sence;; but this is the best I can do lately.

Renee<3
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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    If the person you are writing this poem to is a real friend then they definately would, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Well hun, it makes sense to me. its great. these are the question that everyone asks in their minds, about their friends, or sometimes even about themselves.
    good flow, nice poem :)

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    It makes sense to my interpretation. it's saying what if I allowed you to see my, the whole of me, and what if I told you everything that was on my mind, would you be there to listen, would you still be in my presence, would you accept me, would you just be there or just walk away, perhaps like the rest who have not bothered.
    :) love your work.

  • 15 years ago

    by DreaminThruTheDays

    Your poem makes total sense.. It is what everyone wants to ask their friend but are to scared to do it.

  • 15 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    No; I wouldnt walk back in ..

    .. Cause ii wouldn't leave you in the first place.

    x0x

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