by serone Sep 21, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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It's the matter of time. |
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I reallly loved your last line it kinda left a sting, i could also see the message whi h waws pretty nice, just a suggestion though, i think you cuold improve this poem without using the repeptive lines and adding more detail. but i really did like it nice write maybe u can read one of mine. |