Another amazing mysteriuos poem

"I'm sick of writing the lines,
With desperation in each one -
Only to erase them all eventually,
Because the hurt can't be undone."

Excellent opening, your words really capture my heart and captivate my mind. Your wording is so sad and heartbreaking.

"But when the sun shines brightly,
I can't speak through these tears,
Because the world gets so dark,
So clouded by these empty fears."

I like how here and in this whole poem, you really express yourself and how you feel nicely. Great rhyming, and flow used too.

Beautifully written, I really enjoyed this write from you. 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever..

Absolutley stunning.. x

Awwww .. wow i loved it =]