I miss you

by XoXoBriannaoXoX   Sep 23, 2008


I miss the way we used to be.
the way that you used to hold me.
the way we kissed all the time.
i just miss when you were mine.

i miss you more everyday.
the pain just never goes away.
i miss you more then anything.
i love you so much,
and i dont know what to do...

because im NOTHING without
YOU!!!

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  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    5/5. Great job with the consistency of the flow with this one. Also, you kept the rhyme from start to finish. Amazing job young poet

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow. This one really hit home for me, i can really relate to this piece. I think it's one of your best so far. It flowed well and your wording was so simply put, yet to powerful, and emotional. I really loved htis one. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hi there your poem is just lovely although it sort of leaves one with a lump in the throat because you sound so lost and lonely,nice write

    Grant

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