Comments : To You Everything Seems In It's Place

  • 15 years ago

    by Donna

    Really nice poem, it was so well written and flowed so nicely. its so sad but u have to admit it in order to get over it and with people by u, u will get through it and come out stronger.

    Keep strong and never give up

    Comment my poems if u get a chance please

    x

  • 15 years ago

    by XxEmotionally TakenxX

    Wow love this...i can definitely relate..i used to be the same way..always having that smile to hide behind...and nobody could ever tell i was depressed..but ive had two best friends pass away within 3 days of each other..and that taught me that life is wayy to short to be unhappy and sad all the time..u never know when ur time will be up. be thankful for all the things u have and for all the people in ur life, cause u never know when they can be taken away.. im happier now that ive learned so much..i know its pretty bad when it takes a death of someone to overcome ur own problems within urself.

    i know this is long and im sorry lol..but stay positive and everything be okay! =)

  • 14 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    OMG! this is sopooo me, but only recently ive been feeling depressed & not myself but when im around the ppl i no i act the same as always so i dont have to explain all my problems..

    Very well done! Keep it up!
    *Hunny*