Love Tenders

by Ana   Sep 25, 2008


As the sun is setting
And the day, it turns to night
My heart is filled with passion
With your face within my sight

I smile at your laughter
And I steal from you a kiss
At once I'm gathered in your arms
In this crazy bliss

Sometimes as the darkness comes
I fear the end if near
But if I stop and listen close
Your heartbeat I can hear

And all I need is that one sound
Your love, your life, your touch
And your tender love embrace
When it becomes too much

So hold me close and whisper near
I love to hear you say
The moment that forever ends
I'll love you until that day.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, wonderfull write. I loved the flow and structure of this poem, however; I noticed you didn't use any puncuation. Puncuation is very important in poetry, it makes the reader know when to stop/pause. It also helps with the overall flow/structure of the poem.

    Overall this was an excellent write, keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe