I'll Be Everything

by Raychil   Sep 25, 2008


I know I'm not perfect
A savior or a saint
But I can make you smile
Although sometimes its faint

I can be the hand you hold
When you've fallen down
I can be the air you breathe
To save you before you drown

I can be the shoulder
You lean on just to cry
I can be the hero
To save you before you die

I can be your comfort
To keep you warm at night
I can be your star
And shine a guiding light

I can be the rain
To wash away your tears
I can be your eyes
So you can see clear

I can be the love
Pumping in your heart
And I can be the one to hold you
When the world tears you apart.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "I can be the hand you hold
    When you've fallen down
    I can be the air your breathe
    To save you before you drown"

    Third line: "your" should be "you".
    Otherwise very sweet words here, and your rhyming choice is great.

    "I can be the rain
    To wash away your tears
    I can be your eyes
    So you can see clear"

    I love this part, very touching and heartfelt.

    "I can be the love
    Pumping in your heart
    And I can be the one to hold you
    When the world tears you apart."

    A great way to end this friendship poem, good work. 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...

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