I Feel

by SIMPLY ME   Sep 30, 2008


I feel as if everyone is pushing me away,I ask the same questions"what did I do,what did I say?"I feel my friends could care less,I feel my family just thinks im a mess.I feel my friends dont wanna be there for me,have I become invisible?my pain they don't see.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Raychil

    I liked the message in this poem, but perhaps you should watch your separation of lines, make it easier to follow. Good rhythm though, a very wonderful piece.
    <3Raych

    thanks for your comment.

  • 15 years ago

    by xxXCrazyXNeonXGurlXxx

    Really good a lot of it its in question form really good. . .4/5. . .I know what u mean to sometimes i think that my friends dont care.

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