"She's lurking around her world,
Finding nothing but shattered glass,
Around the ground; she will twirl,
Waiting for her next moment to be in class."

What a captivating opening to this poem! I love how you introduce this piece by saying what the character is feeling, doing etc...Great word choice, I could already tell this was going to be a great poem!

"Seems like outside of the classroom,
Her mind wanders off into a different place,
With dark entities waiting to consume;
Waiting to capture; waiting to chase."

I love how you say "dark entities", and good flow.

"Soon enough it'll just two minutes too late,
She be alone in a dark place- for sure."

Very captivating, has the reader taking in each and every line of your work.

"And now the channdelier bulbs are beyond dim,
In her own world; is where she belongs; lifelong."

Such an entrancing ending, and how you put "channdelier bulbs..." that was brilliant. This really summed it up nicely, and you should be proud of this poem, you wrote it so well. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....

Beautiful poem I could easily see the stark images in my minds eye

And now the channdelier bulbs are beyond dim,
In her own world; is where she belongs; lifelong

^^ So these two lines as well as the first two are phenomenal. <3 i really really love them. I can see them clearly and they're dark and creepy..

5/5

Great poem.

Very well written. Chilling!

Bomb poem keep it up

Wow ryssie.
What a captivating piece. Getting your reader to think...and making us feel the pain and anguish.
Wow hunni... this is really good.
but i do hate that its coming from you.
then again.. life isn't always gum drops and lollipops either.
Wonderfully written and worded. i loved it...
:]

Absolutely wonderful. 5/5.

Wow this is a really beautiful poem
and I can relate to it in so many different ways
5/5