Done(unfinished song)

by Sman   Oct 6, 2008


I'm done waiting for you
Dying for you
Ive felt all the pain I'm going to
Theres nothing left that i can do
and don't pretend that you never knew
that my heart you did accrue

(chorus)
Ive waited and pleaded
Been shunned and mistreated
for your time i have competed
and now i feel so defeated

cant do this for another day
its seems cupid has gone astray
no more words will i say
its time i went my own way
cause i realized how you felt today
realized your heart my actions will never sway

(chorus)

I'm done waiting for you
dying for you
after all the games you put me through
your greatest chance it seems you blew

I'm done........cant do this again
I'm done........ trying to be your special friend
I'm done........ done leaving it all on the line
I'm done........ being the last in line

(chorus x2)

Ok this is another song that i wrote. the only problem being is i don't play the guitar so its hard to write lyrics without hearing the musical part of it so its not the final product. please comment and rate. and also message me with any suggestions

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  • 15 years ago

    by SIMPLY ME

    Thantz an awsome song