My Final Prayer

by Saara   Oct 8, 2008


Here I stand
I am all alone
No one to turn to
No where to go

Crying here
Full with my fears
No one could ever
Stop my tears

Falling down
I just can't stop
Turning round
It's all my fault

I'm in too deep
Just can't go back
Heading down
That one way track

I've reached the end
I just can't cope
I'll hit the ground
I had no where to go

I've given up
No point anymore
There is no handle
On that door

I'll close my eyes
Begin to pray
And hope all these fears
Just fade away...

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  • 15 years ago

    by the nomad

    "I've given up
    No point anymore
    There is no handle
    On that door"...amazing sense of writting...good potential..!>!..

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked this poem. It was a good legnth the fomat was good and I liked the wording that you used. I gave it a 5/5

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