My death note

by tara   Oct 12, 2008


You know those days when your standing at the edge of a dark pit and you know if you jump your going to die but you want that image inside your mind and you know life would be better for those around you because you know your the reason for their problems and no matter what you do you cant fix it. so when you stand at the edge of that pit with your toes hanging off and you feel your self leaning forward with every Mamore that jolts through the thin membrane in your mind just remember when you die nothing will change the soul always remembers.....then what will you do? die again? NO! because you cant. so make sure you look deeper inside that pit and consider that whatever you do nothing will ever change..ever but who knows maybe a life in hell is better... maybe you'll find someone that actually will like you emotional drained mind, body, and soul?

P.S. isn't anyone willing to pull me back or shove me in?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rynishia

    I like your poem, because it's raw.

  • 17 years ago

    by ghassan khzouz

    Life is not just how you want to live.. life is so gr8 coz one day you will find your hero.. you will find someone whom will rescue you from your fears and you will feel sry for your self cause one day you were thinking of this..
    lsn i do this all the time, when i get in a bad mood and something like shit happens i think of how many hours remain to end the day and i say to my self no one will ruin my day and i want to make this remaining hours the best hours of my life and then i get so happy and something good happens..